Okay! Here is more of the first chapter:
Before she could reply, she began to yawn. He smiled. "I think we better go home. We would not want you to fall asleep in the woods." "But..." She began, but was stopped by another one of her yawns. "Don't worry, we'll come back tomorrow." He said. "Alright..." She sighed, and the two of them got up and began walking back home, hand in hand, smiling.
They were half way through the forest when Grace suddenly stopped. Something is wrong. She thought. A chill went down her spine, and she began to tremble. There is something watching us, and it's not natural. "What's wrong, Penny?" Daddy asked, sounding a bit confused. She looked at him, but he didn't seem worried at all. His face shows no fear, and there is no fear in his voice! Which means- She thought and quickly looked behind her. She felt her heart skip a beat. A wolf was standing by a tree, it's fur ink black with stunning blue eyes. No... She thought, staring at the unnatural wolf. "No... Please, go away..." She whispered, as if she feared her voice would make the creature angry, but instead it closed it's eyes and sighed. "I'm sorry." Said the wolf, in english, it's voice sounding like a little girl. "But you need to get up." Suddenly everything got blurry. The trees, the sky, the grass, even Daddy began to fade away. "No... No, please! Wait!" She began running to Daddy, who was smiling gently. "Please, Daddy, stay! Don't leave me!" She yelled, tears streaming from her eyes. A tear rolled down his cheek, trying his best to smile. "I'm sorry, I wish I could stay." Suddenly everything faded to black, and everything disappeared but Grace. She stood there, motionless. Daddy's words repeated in her head over and over, until she fell to her knees, crying. She couldn't even feel the ground, being able to stand on some unknown surface. She closed her eyes tight and screamed with all the energy she had.
Okay! That's all you get for now (heh heh...)! Like it? Love it? Hate it? Don't know? Tell me on the little voting poll thingy at the side, and I might keep posting the book. Hope you people like it! BTW! This is NOT the ending of the first chapter, still only a part of it.
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